it flew against the air tenaciously ,
to mingle with one of its own,
it lamented on its way,
thinking ,where the others have gone,
it remembered that moment,
and those emotions,
when the body was obliterated,
and everybody went,
it was after all,
just a particle of ash,
searching for the eloped soul,
which was now without a face,
but the soul was in zeal,
dancing in ecstasy,
there was no sadness,
only happiness in real…
I loved the your perspective on the feelings of the ash and soul…..I never thought about it like this. 👍
Thank you so much radhika..really glad to share this..
Nicely Written!!!
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Thank you..will read your blog soon..
Ashes searching for lost soul.. It’s a wonderful combination shreyans
Thank you akhila..
Love this – beautifully written & great imagery
Thank you for the kind words..really glad..
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Great poem!
Thank you so much..)